Indeed a great Turquine story is developing again. Wonder how our hero explains being late by 25 minutes, it seemed he was well on his way home at five to one.
I really appreciate y'all's comments, sometimes you point out things I missed. Obviously I didn't think out the red light sequence too well (when I went back, it isn't clear whether he stopped at the red light or ran it, I had intended him to be slowed and frustrated by being stopped, that's why the light on him is green in the last frame, he can go now. I now see I should have shown the car from the outside, stopped at the light), and even in a good sized metro it might make more sense if he got home a little bit earlier, and he'd still get spanked if it was 1:01. I may go back and rework those details at some point. Maybe he stops at a couple of red lights and then runs one in frustration, not realizing it's one of those evil ones that takes your picture.
Oh boy oh boy oh boy...!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to see this little interaction play out. You are awesome, Mr. Turquine!
Indeed a great Turquine story is developing again. Wonder how our hero explains being late by 25 minutes, it seemed he was well on his way home at five to one.
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate y'all's comments, sometimes you point out things I missed. Obviously I didn't think out the red light sequence too well (when I went back, it isn't clear whether he stopped at the red light or ran it, I had intended him to be slowed and frustrated by being stopped, that's why the light on him is green in the last frame, he can go now. I now see I should have shown the car from the outside, stopped at the light), and even in a good sized metro it might make more sense if he got home a little bit earlier, and he'd still get spanked if it was 1:01. I may go back and rework those details at some point. Maybe he stops at a couple of red lights and then runs one in frustration, not realizing it's one of those evil ones that takes your picture.
ReplyDeleteAnd, he was responding to a text while driving.....
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